Band 5+: How often do you meet with your extended family?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is a bit tangential. While it touches upon the importance of family, it doesn't directly address the question of how often the speaker meets with extended family. Try to directly answer the question first, then elaborate on the reasons behind the frequency of your meetings.

The answer demonstrates a reasonable level of coherence, presenting two contrasting viewpoints. However, the repetition of "thirdly" and the slightly hesitant start show some lack of fluency. Practice speaking more smoothly and avoid unnecessary repetition.

The vocabulary used is mostly appropriate and accurate, with words like "belonging" and "critical" showing a good range. However, the phrase "sense of thirdly" is incorrect and needs improvement. Focus on using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary.

The grammar contains some errors, particularly the repeated "thirdly" and the slightly awkward phrasing of "my feel being." While the overall structure is understandable, improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would enhance the response. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions.