Band 7+: How often do you use your mobile phone for things other than calling?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is on-topic and directly addresses the question by listing several non-calling/texting uses of the mobile phone. It provides specific examples (attendance via QR code, watching TV series, movies, anime, and YouTube), which demonstrates a natural and elaborated response. To achieve a higher score, the student could add a brief comment on the frequency (e.g., 'daily' or 'several times a day') and perhaps a concluding sentence to round off the answer more naturally.

The answer is generally coherent and organized with a clear list of uses. However, there is some repetition ('I use my phone' repeated) and a minor self-correction ('I I use it'). To improve, reduce redundancy and use more varied linking words to connect ideas more smoothly.

Vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic, with some good phrases like 'QR code technique' and 'taking attendance.' However, the range is limited, and there is repetition of 'use' and 'watch.' To score higher, incorporate more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'scan a QR code,' 'stream series,' or 'browse YouTube.'

Grammar is mostly accurate, with correct use of present simple tense and a few complex structures (e.g., 'because my university uses...'). However, there is a minor error ('for attending' should be 'for attendance') and some awkward phrasing. To improve, use a wider range of structures, such as conditional or relative clauses, and ensure prepositions are used correctly.