Band 6+: How popular is watching wildlife in your country?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer stays on topic and directly addresses the question about the popularity of watching wildlife. It provides a clear stance (not very popular) and supports it with a personal perspective and a general observation about urban people. However, the response could be more developed with specific examples, such as mentioning popular wildlife destinations, TV programs, or activities like birdwatching. Additionally, the phrasing 'wildlife is reasonable' is slightly awkward; consider using 'common' or 'part of everyday life' for more natural expression. Overall, the answer is coherent and relevant, but lacks depth and a more native-like flow.

The answer is generally coherent and organized, with a clear introduction and conclusion. However, there are some issues with fluency, such as the abrupt transition from 'wildlife is reasonable' to 'and we have never been disconnected from wildlife' without a clear connector. The phrase 'But there are some other urban people' could be smoother. To improve, use more cohesive devices and ensure smoother transitions between ideas. Also, avoid the slight contradiction between saying wildlife is 'usual' and then saying it's 'not pretty much popular' without clear explanation.

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some good expressions like 'disconnected from wildlife' and 'urban people'. However, there is a misuse of the word 'reasonable' which seems to be a translation error; 'common' or 'prevalent' would be more appropriate. The phrase 'pretty usual' is informal and could be replaced with 'quite common'. To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and avoid informal or incorrect word choices.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors. For example, 'Everybody grew in an environment' should be 'Everybody grew up in an environment'. The sentence 'wildlife is reasonable' is grammatically correct but semantically incorrect. The answer uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but could benefit from more variety. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement and use a wider range of grammatical structures, such as conditionals or relative clauses.