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Band 6+: How should people encourage childern to express themselves when being asked questions that they are afraid to answer.

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Well, in my personal opinion, individuals have to give some time before children answer the question. Because it really assists children in answering the question effectively. And secondly, when children are speaking, others should listen to them very attentively.

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Well, in my personal opinion, the individual have to give some time before children answer the question. Because it really assists children to answer the question very effectively. And secondly, when children are speaking time, other people should listen to the question very effectively.

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