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Band 6+: If you could donate a large amount of money to any charity what would it be

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I suppose I would choose a children's charity because last year I visited a school and felt very sad. Many of the children's parents are alcoholics or unable to provide enough love. I don't want children to live in that situation because they deserve to have a happy life and need their parents' love. So, that's just what I think.

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I suppose I would go for a children’s charity because last year I went to the school and I was very sad. Like their parents are alcoholic or they can’t get enough love. So I didn’t want to be children’s living like that situation because children would be living in a very happy life and need to get their parents love. So I just think that.

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