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Band 6+: In what ways can governments effectively address the challenges of income inequality?

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I think that inequality in our society is still a big problem. Even this problem existed many decades ago, and it is sad to realize that even now, in the 21st century, we have the same issue. I think that the response, the task of our government, should be to tackle this problem with new laws that support both genders, without any restrictions or limits to one gender, to help them feel equal to one another. I believe that addressing income inequality in society should be a significant step to avoid this problem.

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I think that inequality in our society is still a big problem. Even this problem existed many decades ago and it is sad to realize that even now in 21st century we have the same problem. I think that the response, the task of our government should be that they should tackle this problem with the new laws which contains a support of two genders and without any restrictions, without any limits to one gender, to help them to feel not unique from another. And I think that through income, inequality in society, should be a big step to avoid this problem.

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problem: 4

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inequality: 2

society: 2

should: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the topic of income inequality and suggests governmental intervention through new laws promoting gender equality. However, the answer could be strengthened by providing more specific examples of policies or strategies governments could implement. Expanding on the potential impact of these measures would also enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and reformulations. The ideas are presented, but the connections between them could be clearer. To improve, practice organizing your thoughts more logically and using cohesive devices to link sentences and ideas smoothly. For example, use transition words like 'furthermore,' 'however,' and 'therefore' to guide the listener through your argument.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The word choice is sometimes basic (e.g., 'big problem'). To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to the topic of income inequality. For instance, instead of 'big problem,' you could use terms like 'significant disparity' or 'pronounced imbalance.' Also, learn and use synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are several errors that affect clarity. For example, 'which contains a support of two genders' is awkward, and 'to help them to feel not unique from another' is grammatically incorrect. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately. Review sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of prepositions. Practice constructing more complex sentences while ensuring they are grammatically sound.

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