Band 6+: In what ways has the definition of 'success' evolved among the younger generation compared to their parents?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear contrast between the two generations mentioned. The distinction between social media influence for the younger generation and financial stability for the older generation is well-articulated. To reach a higher band, the answer could be further developed by explaining the underlying reasons for this shift - for example, how the digital revolution has changed the way value is perceived. Additionally, ensuring the response remains strictly in the general realm (avoiding 'I' or personal anecdotes) is important, which was handled well here. Expanding on the implications of these different definitions would add more depth to the response.

You maintained a good flow and responded directly to the question. You used some cohesive devices like 'First of all' and 'But for the other side' (though 'On the other hand' is more natural). However, the coherence was slightly hindered by repetitive phrasing ('in this sphere... in this sphere'). To improve, try to use a wider variety of linking words and avoid repeating the same noun phrases in consecutive sentences.

You used appropriate vocabulary to convey your meaning, such as 'topical' and 'sphere.' However, there was some inaccuracy and repetition. For example, 'social media sources' should be 'social media platforms,' and 'the biggest part of new generation' is better expressed as 'the majority of the younger generation.' To reach a higher band, aim for more precise collocations and idiomatic expressions (e.g., 'financial stability' instead of 'you in budget').

There were several grammatical errors that affected the precision of your answer. Specifically, there were issues with subject-verb agreement ('the biggest part... are' should be 'is'), pluralization ('different definition' should be 'different definitions'), and awkward phrasing ('success is about you in budget'). You relied heavily on simple sentence structures. To improve, practice using complex sentences with relative clauses (e.g., 'While parents prioritize..., teenagers tend to focus on...') and ensure your noun-adjective agreements are correct.