Part 3

Band 5+: In what ways might globalization be impacting cultural identity in your country?

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

64% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

I think that when globalization affected Indonesia, it meant that when foreign people came to Indonesia, they would impact our cultural identity, and it would be less used in cultural activities.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I think that when globalization effected in Indonesia, it said when foreign people came to Indonesia and I’m from Indonesia, so when foreign people came to Indonesia, they will effect on our cultural identity and will be less used in the cultural activity.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 12 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.

Vocabulary Repetition:

indonesia: 2

would: 2

cultural: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, provide more detailed explanations and concrete instances of how globalization has affected cultural identity in Indonesia. Consider discussing both positive and negative impacts and elaborating on the specific cultural activities that are less frequently practiced. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('when foreign people came to Indonesia' is repeated). Try to avoid repeating phrases and use a wider range of linking words to improve coherence. For example, you could use 'therefore' or 'consequently' to show the relationship between globalization and cultural identity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. While the words used are appropriate, expanding your vocabulary and using more specific terms would enhance your response. For example, instead of 'effect,' you could use 'influence' or 'transform.' Also, consider using synonyms for 'cultural identity' to demonstrate a broader lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are grammatical errors in the response, such as the incorrect use of 'effected' instead of 'affected.' Also, the sentence structure is somewhat basic. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in verb tenses and word forms. For example, try using conditional sentences or passive voice where appropriate.

Answers On The Same Topic:

In what ways might globalization be impacting cultural identity in your country?

Globalization means interaction amongst countries in terms of trade and even culture. It has got a number of effects both positive and some drawbacks. In my opinion, I think globalization affects culture positively. People are able to learn new cultures and embrace them and even pass these lands, norms and cultural activities to the next […]

Band 7+

In what ways might globalization be impacting cultural identity in your country?

In my country, globalization has affected significantly. We can see people are now more modern and they are trying to connect with the world more often than the previous years. In the cultural opinion, it hasn’t changed a lot, but there are some minor changes in our culture since globalization has occurred.

Band 7+

In what ways might globalization be impacting cultural identity in your country?

Globalization has deeply influenced cultural identity across the globe in various ways. Today, with ease of international travel and frequent flights connecting diverse regions, individuals have presented unprecedented opportunities to explore new cultures. As a result, many people are drawn to places where they feel a deep personal connection. This phenomenon often leads to a […]

Band 8+

In what ways might globalization be impacting cultural identity in your country?

We all know that this is the era of globalization. The world is much smaller nowadays and it definitely has affected different local cultures because Because with globalization we now have access to almost every type of cultural and recreational events around the world. So we can enjoy different types of events from different countries […]

Band 7+

See All

How might the rise of remote work influence urban planning and the design of cities?

from my perspective yes absolutely with remote-volatile urban planning in the next periods and I think this remote online working is a as a usual habit to in this in the next years and I think it affects to the urban areas especially in a one people’s not come to this cities or modernizing cities […]

Band 4+

What impact do electronic devices have on people?

I believe that electronic devices have both positive and negative impact on people. On the one hand, these tools allows everyone to look for materials that they need anytime and anywhere. Besides, we can also contact with our beloved ones easily as well as keep up with chance on the internet. However, there are still […]

Band 6+

Why are people keen on buying new electronic devices?

In my opinion, I believe that people are interested in buying new electronic devices simply because they have a fear of missing out. For example, whenever a new iPhone is shown on the market, many people immediately buy on the by it simply because they see others having a new phone and they just want […]

Band 6+

When do most children begin to make their own decisions?

Well, I think it depends on the culture of eight countries. You know, in Western countries, parents often teach their children to be independent. So, children could make their our decision when they were little. However, in Eastern Asian nations, parents tend to play essential roles. So children may not express their thoughts. They also […]

Band 6+

In what ways does the design of public spaces (parks, plazas) influence community interaction and mental health?

So there are many ways to design the public space places that can influence any community and mental health. So as you can see the parks that start the parks, the entrance of the park that they created that can attract childs so they must visit that park and inside the park we have too […]

Band 4+

What are the potential consequences of children using voice-activated smart devices at home for their language development?

I suppose that children who use voice smart devices at home can enhance their opportunities, their speech and just, it will inevitably change their knowledge. And it’s evident that people who, the children who use voice devices at home, it’s smart phones or different speaking stations like Alisa or different and it can improve themselves […]

Band 4+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium