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Band 5+: In what ways might globalization be impacting cultural identity in your country?

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I think that when globalization affected Indonesia, it meant that when foreign people came to Indonesia, they would impact our cultural identity, and it would be less used in cultural activities.

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I think that when globalization effected in Indonesia, it said when foreign people came to Indonesia and I’m from Indonesia, so when foreign people came to Indonesia, they will effect on our cultural identity and will be less used in the cultural activity.

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cultural: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, provide more detailed explanations and concrete instances of how globalization has affected cultural identity in Indonesia. Consider discussing both positive and negative impacts and elaborating on the specific cultural activities that are less frequently practiced. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('when foreign people came to Indonesia' is repeated). Try to avoid repeating phrases and use a wider range of linking words to improve coherence. For example, you could use 'therefore' or 'consequently' to show the relationship between globalization and cultural identity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. While the words used are appropriate, expanding your vocabulary and using more specific terms would enhance your response. For example, instead of 'effect,' you could use 'influence' or 'transform.' Also, consider using synonyms for 'cultural identity' to demonstrate a broader lexical range.

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There are grammatical errors in the response, such as the incorrect use of 'effected' instead of 'affected.' Also, the sentence structure is somewhat basic. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in verb tenses and word forms. For example, try using conditional sentences or passive voice where appropriate.

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