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Band 6+: In your opinion, what are the potential benefits and drawbacks of living in a highly urbanized society?

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So the potential benefits of a highly urbanized society are that you can go to every restaurant, you can see every cafe with your friends, and you have many large malls where you can buy clothes. You can go to many places with your friends and have fun. However, the drawbacks of living in a highly urbanized society include really bad traffic, the presence of many people around you, and it can be loud in some restaurants or other places. Additionally, you may have large houses, but you also have close neighbors.

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So the potential benefits of high urbanized society is you can go every restaurant, you can see every cafe with your friends, you have really big and many malls where you can buy every clothes you can and you can go every place you can with your friends have a fun we have a really good traffic and the Draftpacks of living in highly urbanized society is I think that’s the really and really bad traffic in the ways or many people around you and it was loud in some restaurants or somewhere and you have really big houses and neighbors

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many: 3

highly: 2

urbanized: 2

society: 2

every: 2

friends: 2

large: 2

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The response addresses the question by discussing both the benefits and drawbacks of urban living. The ideas are relevant, but could be expanded upon to demonstrate a more comprehensive understanding. Consider providing more detailed explanations or examples to support your points.

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