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Band 5+: is it easy to maintain a healthy lifestyle in this modern world?

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According to me, currently we are living in a tech-savvy era, so I can say there is more technology available in the market compared to the past or a decade ago. So, according to me, we have everything to make our lives easier. Like 10 years ago or 20 years ago, there were no robots that could clean our homes or make food for us. But currently, there are many robots available in our nearby area to make our lives easier, like you don't need to wash your car. They can wash your car automatically. However, it is not possible to maintain a healthy life because a healthy life needs very good attention to our bodies and exercise. If we don't do any exercise, then it is obvious that we cannot have a good healthy life.

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According to me currently we are living in a technosavvy era so I can say there are more technology available in market as compared to the past or as compared to a decade ago. So according to me currently we have everything to make our life easier like 10 years ago or 20 years ago there were not robots who can clean our home as well as robots who can make food for us. But currently there are many robots available in our nearby area to make our life easier like you don’t need to wash your car. They can wash your car automatically so it is not possible to maintain healthier life because healthier life needs very good attention to our bodies exercise and also if we don’t do any exercise then it is obvious to not have a good healthy life. .

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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there: 3

make: 3

healthy: 3

life: 3

according: 2

currently: 2

available: 2

lives: 2

easier: 2

years: 2

robots: 2

don't: 2

exercise: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks a clear and consistent discussion of maintaining a healthy lifestyle in the modern world. It focuses more on technological advancements and their impact on daily life rather than directly addressing the challenges and possibilities of health maintenance in a modern context. Consider structuring your response to directly address the question, providing a balanced discussion of both challenges and opportunities for maintaining a healthy lifestyle in today's world.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks a clear structure. The initial discussion of technology feels tangential to the main question. Try to create a more direct link between technological advancements and their impact on healthy lifestyles. Work on smoother transitions between ideas to improve coherence. Reduce the use of fillers like "so" and "according to me."

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Phrases like "tech-savvy era" are good, but more specific vocabulary related to health and lifestyle choices would elevate the response. Try to use more varied synonyms for "easy" and "healthy."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and article usage. The answer is understandable, but more accurate grammar is needed for a higher score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct article usage (a, an, the). Practice using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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