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Band 7+: - Is money always the most important thing when choosing a job? - Why do some people become workaholics?

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You know, money is the most powerful and important thing, so when choosing a job, we need to consider how much salary we get and the probability of being promoted to support our lives financially. Also, some people become workaholics because they are always hungry for development and pursue increasing their knowledge and proficiency to improve their social status and earn more income. That's why they become workaholics. There is someone who wants to change his life.

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You know money money is the most powerful and Important thing so when choosing job we need to Consider about the how much salary we get and what how much probability probability Is there to be promoted to support our lives financially? Also, some people become workaholics since they always hunger for development And they always pursue increasing one’s knowledge and proficiency so that they can improve their social status and get more income. So that’s why they become workaholics. There’s someone who wants to change his life.

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The response addresses both parts of the question, discussing the importance of money in job selection and the reasons behind workaholism. The ideas are relevant, but the development could be more elaborate. Consider providing more detailed explanations or examples to support your points.

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