Band 5+: Is there a hobby you would like to try in the future?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a clear reason for wanting to take up the hobby. To improve the response, consider refining the vocabulary used to describe emotions; for example, instead of saying you feel 'unhappy' when seeing friends swim, you might use terms like 'envious' or 'left out' to more accurately convey the feeling of wanting to join in. Additionally, expanding on how or where you plan to learn could help in providing a more well-rounded and elaborated response.

The speaker manages to convey a basic message, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. There is a lack of cohesive devices beyond simple connectors like 'therefore'. To improve, try to use more natural transitions (e.g., 'Since I can't swim yet...', 'Seeing my friends excel at it makes me realize...') to link your ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive (e.g., using 'thing' to refer to a hobby). The phrase 'add this thing in future' is unnatural. Instead of 'unhappy', which sounds a bit too strong for this context, you might use 'envious' or 'left behind'. Try to use more topic-specific vocabulary related to hobbies and skills, such as 'master a skill', 'take up a new activity', or 'improve my physical fitness'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are significant grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'one of the most is hobby of my is how learn to swimming' is structurally incorrect. You also struggle with verb forms (e.g., 'how learn to swimming' should be 'learning how to swim') and tense consistency. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of gerunds (learning, swimming) and the correct use of 'one of the [plural noun]' constructions.