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Band 5+: Many advertisers like to use sports stars endorsements. what are the reasons?

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Needless to say, sports stars have a lot of respect in society, and sometimes this type of advertising with sports stars, especially football players, increases their publicity about their products. For example, if you see Cristiano Ronaldo in a TV advertisement, you would focus on the television, which features these advertisements.

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Needless to say, sports stars have a lot of respect among the society and sometimes this type of advertised with sports stars, especially football players, which sometimes increase their publicity about about their products, you know. For example, if you see Cristiano Ronaldo in the TV advertisement, you should you would focus on the television, you know, which are advertisements.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 2

stars: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons for using sports stars in advertising. However, it could be improved by expanding on the reasons and providing more detailed examples. Consider exploring other reasons, such as the aspirational nature of sports stars and their ability to connect with a wide audience. More specific examples would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some repetitions and hesitations. The structure could be improved by using clearer topic sentences and transitions between ideas. Try to plan your response briefly before speaking to improve fluency and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but more precise and sophisticated language could be used. Instead of 'a lot of respect,' consider 'high public esteem' or 'widespread admiration.' The phrase 'increase their publicity' could be replaced with 'enhance brand visibility' or 'boost product awareness'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as the repetition of 'about' and the incorrect use of 'which are advertisements.' The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences.

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