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Band 6+: Should parents reward their children when they help others?

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Okay, it has both positive and negative sides for the children. Firstly, on the positive side, it encourages children to help others more. As they understand that what they do is important, they tend to do it more often, and it will teach them values about how important it is to help other people in different situations. Regarding the negative sides, it can create an addiction in children. They may start to expect a response from the people they helped. This is really bad behavior, and every time they help someone, they might wait for a reward.

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Okay, it has both positive and negative sides to the children. Firstly, about positive side, it’s encourage children to help others more. As they understand that they do something is something important and important, they tend to do it often and often and it will teach them values that how it is important to help other people in different topics. And about the negative sides, it can make addiction to the children and the children. The children can wait for a response to the other people who they helped. It’s really bad behavior and bad behavior and every time they help someone, they can wait for a reward.

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The answer adequately addresses both sides of the issue, demonstrating a good understanding of the topic. To improve, consider expanding on the potential negative consequences and exploring alternative approaches to encouraging altruism in children, beyond material rewards.

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The answer is coherent and mostly fluent, although there is some repetition ("often and often", "bad behavior and bad behavior"). Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions between ideas and avoiding unnecessary repetition. Consider pausing briefly between thoughts to organize your ideas before speaking.

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The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise. Words like "response" could be replaced with more specific terms like "appreciation" or "thank you." Using a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the answer.

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