Good evening, teacher. Today I have prepared and are ready for this topic. So here is my response. In this day and age, there are various targeted admins about whether comparative state environments have a negative or negative impact on children. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of it. On the one hand, in a competitive environment, can a pressurized student be very better in a motivated stand and basis that don’t avoid it. Seeing their peers diligence in the sick-beard process to keep up with them and put more of their principled benefits at this as it cannot foster a chance for a world where a start for people especially children. And this is an avoidable of these struggles people will comfort with in a qualified environment as they accept this applying of this chance. And on the other hand, the most principled reason for this is if this can be triggered or demotivated to end as they likely have consistency and winning grandly. As they witness their optimum advancements of different, so as a result this can lead to and decrease improvements in efficiency. Moreover, this also can cause a wider difference in stress on people which make them have a lack of their poor sense of efficiency. So unhealthy competition can increase their confidence.
Band 5+: Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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Good evening, teacher. Today I have prepared and am ready for this topic. So here is my response. In this day and age, there are various targeted arguments about whether competitive environments have a negative or positive impact on children. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of it. On the one hand, in a competitive environment, a pressurized student can be more motivated and strive to improve. Seeing their peers' diligence in the academic process encourages them to keep up and put forth their best efforts. This can foster a chance for growth, especially for children. However, this can also lead to struggles that people will face in a competitive environment as they adapt to this pressure. On the other hand, the most significant reason against this is that it can trigger demotivation, as students may feel overwhelmed by the need to consistently win. As they witness their peers' advancements, this can lead to decreased improvements in their own performance. Moreover, this can also cause increased stress, which can negatively impact their sense of self-efficacy. Therefore, unhealthy competition can undermine their confidence.
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