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Band 7+: the biggest soure of stress'ơ

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Problems with my study are the biggest source of stress for me as it's time. Everyone in my family wants me to do well in school and always has high expectations for me. But I'm not a perfect person who can accomplish everything in a day. I feel like I can't keep up with my peers since they are so good. I feel anxious and afraid in front of a crowd, curled up since my everyday life is impacted by regular headaches and lack of sleep. I get from this stress.

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Problems with my study are the biggest stone of stress for me as it’s time. Everyone in my family wants me to do well in school and always has high expectation for me. But I’m not a perfect person who can’t accomplish everything in a decision. I felt like I couldn’t keep up with my peers since they were so good. I feel anxious and afraid in front of crowd, curled up since my everyday life impacted by the regular headache and sleep. I get from his stress.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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since: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response directly addresses the question and provides a detailed explanation of the source of stress. Consider structuring your response to improve clarity and flow. You could start by stating your main source of stress and then elaborate on the reasons behind it. Adding specific examples could further strengthen your response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few minor instances of repetition and self-correction, but overall, the ideas flow logically. Improving the pacing and reducing the number of pauses would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'high expectation' and 'accomplish' are used appropriately. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range. For example, instead of 'curled up,' a more descriptive phrase could be used to convey the feeling of being overwhelmed.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'stone of stress' instead of 'source of stress,' and 'a decision' should be 'a day' or 'time'. The sentence structure is sometimes a bit awkward. Focusing on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy will significantly improve the score. The phrase 'I get from his stress' is unclear and needs correction.

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