Part 2

Band 5+: The person whom you admire.

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I would like to tell about a person who I admire. It's my bestie. Her name is Altonyne. We met a very kind person in beautiful Hawaii, who I can trust with every secret. We met at my mother's job, where her sister works, and because of her, we started to be friends. Despite the fact that I have a lot of friends whom I have been friends with since childhood, she became a person who I absolutely can trust. Every secret, since I don't know my parents. We have a... She also studies English and we every day try to do speaking to improve our skills. Moreover, she every day sends me reels and makes me laugh. We have a hobby that helps us to speak and spend our time together. It's of course English. In addition, we have a place where we enjoy going together. It's a social cafe, because our first meeting was here. And of course we cost everyone.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I would like to tell about a person who I admire. It’s my bestie. Her name is Altonyne. We met a very kind person in the beautiful Hawaii. who I can trust my every secret. We met at my mother’s job, then her sister works on, and because of her, we started to be friends. Despite on the fact that, despite on the fact that I have a lot of friends whom I can, whom I was, I have been friends since childhood. She became a person who I absolutely can’t trust. Every my secret, since I don’t know my parents. We have a… She also study English and we everyday try to do speaking to improve our skills. Moreover, she every day sends me reels and makes me love. We have a hobby that helps us to speak and spend our time together. It’s of course English. In addition, we have a place where we enjoy to go together. It’s a social confit, because our first meeting was here. And of course we cost everyone.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

have: 5

every: 4

person: 3

it's: 3

friends: 3

trust: 2

secret: 2

where: 2

because: 2

since: 2

english: 2

together: 2

course: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer addresses the topic of an admired person, but it lacks full development and clarity. The response mentions personal experience and some specific details, such as meeting in Hawaii and at the mother's job, but the narrative is somewhat disjointed and contains unclear phrases (e.g., 'we cost everyone'). To improve, focus on organizing the answer more logically, explaining why you admire this person in greater depth, and providing more coherent and specific examples of their qualities or impact on your life.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer has some logical flow but is disrupted by frequent self-corrections, repetitions (e.g., 'despite on the fact that, despite on the fact that'), and unclear connections between ideas. The story jumps between meeting in Hawaii, at the mother's job, and a social cafe without clear transitions. To improve, use cohesive devices like 'firstly,' 'in addition,' and 'however' to link ideas smoothly. Practice speaking without pausing to correct yourself mid-sentence.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'very kind person,' 'every day,' 'every secret'). There are errors like 'makes me love' (should be 'makes me laugh' or 'makes me feel loved') and 'cost everyone' (unclear meaning). The refined version shows 'social cafe' was intended, but the raw answer says 'social confit.' To improve, learn synonyms for common words (e.g., 'admire,' 'trust,' 'friend') and practice using idiomatic expressions naturally. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors: 'despite on the fact that' (should be 'despite the fact that'), 'whom I was' (incomplete), 'she also study' (should be 'studies'), 'we enjoy to go' (should be 'enjoy going'), and 'we cost everyone' (unclear). The answer lacks complex structures like conditionals or relative clauses used correctly. To improve, review subject-verb agreement, prepositions, and verb patterns (e.g., 'enjoy + gerund'). Practice forming sentences with 'who/whom/which' accurately.

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