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Band 5+: To what extent are people influenced by the advertising they see on television?

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Well, firstly I believe that advertising is designed to attract and encourage a lot of people to buy the things it represents. In fact, for example, we can think of many electronic devices, such as telephones, PCs, or computers. In this way, advertising aims to represent and replicate the common situations of our everyday lives.

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Well, firstly I believe that now advising find to attract, to encourage a lot of people to buy things that it represents on no advising. In fact, for example, we can think a lot of electronic device, telephone or PC or computer or new electronic device. In fact, in this way advising find to represent to replicate the common and situation about everyday life of us.

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The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks depth and a comprehensive exploration of the extent to which people are influenced by television advertising. Consider discussing various aspects of influence, such as emotional appeals, persuasive techniques, and the impact on consumer behavior. Broadening the scope of the response and providing more specific examples would improve the overall quality.

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Vocabulary is adequate but not highly precise. Phrases like "advising find to attract" are awkward. Focus on using more precise and natural vocabulary to express your ideas clearly and concisely. The refined answer shows improvement in word choice.

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Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and word order. The refined answer demonstrates improvement, but consistent accuracy is needed. Focus on improving sentence structure and subject-verb agreement. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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