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Band 7+: To what extent do you agree that technological advancements have made us more isolated, despite being more connected?

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Well, I would say it definitely depends on the person. As you might guess, some people know how to limit their screen time; they know how to engage in various activities, group activities, and it doesn't really affect the way we spend meaningful time with others or feel isolated. Some people do not know how to set limits on their technology use, and they just waste time instead of creating unforgettable memories and a meaningful life.

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Well, I would say it definitely ups to the person. As you might guess, some people know how to limit their screen time, they know how to engage in various activities, group activities, and it doesn’t really affect the way we spend meaningful time with others and feel isolated and some people do not do not know how to set limit to the technology use and they just waste time instead of creating unforgettable memories and meaningful life.

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