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Band 7+: To what extent do you believe that individual happiness is influenced by societal factors?

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I think yes, our happiness is of course influenced by society and our environment. We must be careful and ensure our happiness comes from within, not from outside. We shouldn't wait for someone to give us a compliment or anything. We just need to be fulfilled and happy regardless of anything happening.

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I think yes, our happiness of course influenced by the society and our environment. So we must be careful and make our happiness came from our inside, not from outside. and we wait for someone to tell us some compliment or anything. We just need to be fully full and happy regardless of anything happening.

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