Band 5+: To what extent do you think social media influences our perception of reality and personal happiness?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response starts to address the question but is incomplete. It needs further development to fully explore the extent of social media's influence on perceptions of happiness and success. Providing specific examples and elaborating on the mechanisms of influence would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is hesitant and lacks clear organization. There are noticeable pauses and repetitions ('everyone, a number of people who use it is getting more and more. That's why everyone'). To improve, try to structure your answer with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'however,' 'in addition') to link your ideas together smoothly. Practice speaking more fluently without unnecessary pauses.

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. The phrase 'majority role' is not entirely accurate; 'major role' would be better. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of social media and its impact. Read articles and listen to podcasts on similar topics to expand your vocabulary.

The grammar contains errors that affect clarity ('such as everyone, a number of people who use it is getting more and more'). The sentence structure is simple and somewhat awkward. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your sentence construction. Practice using complex sentences and pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.