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Band 7+: To what extent do you think that advertising influences people's purchasing decisions?

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In my opinion, advertising crucially affects people's purchasing decisions. One of the main underlying factors of this development is the rise of social media. Almost every platform or website promotes their premium plans, representing their improved features as the most necessary tools for users. In addition, well-known individuals on the internet create a global chance that often stimulates people to try and buy a certain product.

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In my opinion, advertising crucially affects people’s purchasing decisions. One of the main underlying factors of this development is the rise of social media. to the straight, almost every platform or website promotes their premium plans, representing their improved features as the most necessary tools for our user. In addition, well-known individuals in the internet create a global chance which often stimulate people to try and buy a certain project.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally effective. Phrases like 'crucially affects' and 'underlying factors' are well-chosen. However, there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied vocabulary. For instance, instead of 'create a global chance,' a more specific phrase could be used. To improve lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary and practicing using more nuanced and precise language.

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The grammatical accuracy is generally good, with only a few minor errors. For example, 'to the straight' should be 'almost'. Also, 'in the internet' should be 'on the internet'. The range of structures is adequate, but there's room for improvement. To enhance grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing and practicing more complex sentence structures and paying close attention to prepositions and articles.

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