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Band 7+: What are some of the major factors contributing to the endangerment of plants and animals in today's world?

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From my perspective, people create air pollution by using their personal vehicles instead of public transportation. Moreover, sometimes governments and individuals try to eliminate plants and jungles in order to construct new buildings. These behaviors can destroy the habitat for many kinds of animals and plants, resulting in their endangerment.

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From my perspective, people can create air pollution by using their personal vehicles instead of public transportation. Moreover, sometimes governments and individuals try to vanish plants and jungles in order to construct new buildings. So these behaviors can destroy the habitat for many kinds of animals and plants and result in their endangerment.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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plants: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid factors. However, expanding on these points with more detail and examples would strengthen the response. Consider exploring other factors beyond habitat destruction, such as climate change, poaching, and the illegal wildlife trade.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. The ideas flow logically. Minor improvements in fluency could be achieved by slightly smoother transitions between sentences. For example, instead of 'Moreover, sometimes governments and individuals try to...', a more concise phrasing like 'Additionally, habitat destruction...' would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'vanish' could be replaced with more precise terms like 'destroy' or 'eliminate' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary. Using more specific examples of endangered species or habitats would further enhance the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. The sentence 'So these behaviors can destroy the habitat for many kinds of animals and plants and result in their endangerment' could be improved by combining the two verbs ('destroy' and 'result') into a single, more concise clause, as in the refined answer. This would demonstrate a more sophisticated grammatical range.

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