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Band 7+: what are the benefits of being friends with or working with old peolple

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I believe their wisdom and perspective on life can help you learn valuable lessons that can surely guide you in many ways. I also think that they can be good mentors at work or supportive and loyal as friends because they avoid drama, which is common among young people. They value a renewed and steady kind of relationship.

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I believe their wisdom and both page-div on life can help you learn valuable lessons that can surely guide you in so many ways. I also think that they can be good mentors at work or they can be supportive and loyal as a friend because they avoid drama which is common among young people. They value a renewed and steady kind of relationship.

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant benefits. The ideas are well-developed and coherent. To further enhance the response, consider providing specific examples or elaborating on the points made to demonstrate a deeper understanding.

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