Band 4+: What are the differences between actors/actresses who earn much and those who earn little?

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The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and clarity. It mentions factors like salary, skills, and popularity, but doesn't elaborate on how these factors differentiate high-earning and low-earning actors. The example provided is unclear and doesn't support the points made. Focus on providing a more structured comparison of the characteristics and circumstances that contribute to the income disparity among actors. Avoid irrelevant details and ensure a clear and concise explanation.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the structure is rambling and lacks a clear line of reasoning. There's unnecessary repetition and the example with Ziaz Zhejiang is unclear and doesn't directly support the main point. Work on organizing your thoughts into a more logical sequence and providing clearer examples.

Vocabulary is adequate but not precise. Phrases like "extra interest" are vague. Try to use more specific and sophisticated vocabulary to describe the factors influencing actors' salaries (e.g., 'market demand,' 'critical acclaim,' 'box office success').

Grammar contains several errors, including incorrect use of tenses and prepositions. The sentence structure is often awkward. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and appropriate use of articles.