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Band 6+: What are the main reasons why people organise family parties in your country?

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There are several main reasons why people organize family parties in my country. Firstly, it's a way to strengthen and improve relationships. For example, if a son or daughter has gotten married and moved far away, a family party is a great way to reconnect and spend quality time together. It's a chance to have meaningful conversations and enjoy a meal as a family. Another reason is to maintain contact with family members who live far away. Since they don't see each other often, these gatherings provide a valuable opportunity to stay connected and share important moments together.

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So actually ne reasons. And first of all, to upgrade and strength their relationship. Uh, for example, um, their son or a daughter had a wedding, and now they’re living a long distance away, and they just make such a. So easy thing to themselves and have such a conversation, dinner with them just to ev improve their relationship. Also to have a contact with them. Why they so long away from each other got their one family and they need to have such kind of meetings.

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The student provides a good response to the question, identifying two main reasons for family parties. However, the answer could be more specific and elaborate on the reasons in more detail. For example, the student could mention other reasons like celebrating birthdays, holidays, or special achievements.

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