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Band 5+: What are the potential long-term consequences of the growing popularity of personalized medicine?

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The consequences of the long-term popularity of personalized medicine are really concerning. For several aspects of medicine, the audience must consider the community when it becomes more personalized. This can affect many things, like the quality of service and also your qualifications. For example, when you go to a hospital, if you have money or family, you can become a VIP at that hospital. The implications of this competition are significant.

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It is the consequences of long term popularity, personalized medicine is really concerning. For several items of the medicine, the audience must be selfish for the community and when it became more personalized. It can be a lot of things like the quality of the service and also your qualification on something. For example, when you came to a hospital and If you have money, if you have family, you can VIP of this hospital. Okay, um, what’s up? The police sign. Left face of this competition.

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