Band 7+: What are your favourite sport?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is well-organized and coherent. Consider expanding on why you enjoy swimming, perhaps by mentioning specific aspects you find appealing, such as the feeling of the water or the challenge of improving technique. Adding a personal anecdote could also make the response more engaging.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. Minor repetition of 'swimming' could be avoided by using synonyms or pronouns. The pace is good, and the ideas flow naturally. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow, such as 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' or 'moreover'.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The term 'aquarium sport' is incorrect; it should be 'aquatic sport'. While the range of vocabulary is sufficient, using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would elevate the response. For example, instead of 'many kinds of swimming types,' consider 'various swimming strokes'.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. The phrase 'non-contact sport and it can be seen' is slightly awkward and could be improved by using a conjunction such as 'and it is also' or restructuring the sentence. While the range of grammatical structures is present, using more complex sentence structures would demonstrate a higher level of grammatical proficiency.