Band 5+: What are your favourite sport?

Your pronunciation needs significant improvement as it may hinder comprehension. Devote time to individual sounds and their combinations.

The response is relevant to the question, but it could be improved by directly stating the favorite sport and elaborating on why it is favored. The mention of Fraser & Lanz seems out of place and detracts from the answer. Focus on clearly expressing personal preferences and providing specific reasons for liking the chosen sports.

The answer is understandable but lacks a clear structure. The connection between the introduction and the mention of Fraser & Lanz is unclear and disrupts the flow. Focus on answering the question directly and concisely before elaborating.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "muscle store" are inaccurate. Try using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the benefits of swimming and yoga. Consider synonyms for 'benefits'.

There are grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "such are." The sentence structure is also somewhat awkward in places. Work on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles.