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Band 6+: What aspects do young people have strong opinions about? What aspects do old people have strong opinions about? Do you think parents should educate their children to have strong opinions?

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Well, there will be nothing else but technology, climate change, and entertainment videos, which are all that children learn, see, and hear as they grow up. That's why they are all imprinted in their minds. When it comes to seniors, they have strong opinions about political issues and ethical matters that influence their growth. In my opinion, parents should educate their children to have strong opinions from a young age, especially by helping them express everything on their minds, such as their perspectives and so on. This way, they can use all the advantages.

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Well, there will be nothing else but about technology, climate change, entertainment videos that are all what children learn, see and hear as they were young. And that’s why they are all printed in their mind. And when it comes to the senior, they have a strong sense in their opinions about the political issues and ethical work that influence, that affects their growth. Well, in an email opinion, parents should educate their children to have strong opinions when they were young, especially such as help them to talk everything about their in their mind, such as their perspectives and so on. So that they can use all the advantages.

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The answer is well-organized and addresses all parts of the question. Consider expanding on the reasons behind the opinions of young and old people, providing more specific examples, and elaborating on the 'advantages' of having strong opinions. A more nuanced discussion of the potential drawbacks of strong opinions would also strengthen the response.

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The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few minor hesitations and slightly unnatural phrasing ("there will be nothing else but..."), but the overall flow is good. Improving the use of connectors would enhance fluency and coherence further. For example, instead of simply stating the opinions of young and old people consecutively, you could use transition words like "In contrast" or "On the other hand" to create a smoother transition between the two groups.

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The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "imprinted" are used effectively. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used. For example, instead of "entertainment videos," you could use "media" or "popular culture." Expanding the range of vocabulary would improve the score.

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The grammar is mostly correct, but there are some minor errors. For example, the phrase "in an email opinion" is incorrect. There are also some instances of slightly awkward phrasing. While the range of grammatical structures is present, greater accuracy and more sophisticated structures would elevate the score. Focus on improving sentence structure and avoiding minor grammatical errors.

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