Band 7+: what did you do on your birthday when you were young?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear account of past birthday celebrations. There is a noticeable shift in perspective from childhood to the present, adding depth to the answer. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details about the activities or events that took place during those childhood birthdays. This would provide a richer and more vivid picture for the listener.

The response is generally fluent, but there are some hesitations ('you know') and self-corrections that slightly disrupt the flow. The organization is clear, but could benefit from more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. Try to minimize filler words and focus on connecting your thoughts more directly.

The vocabulary is relatively varied and attempts to use sophisticated words ('significant,' 'reflect my wealth,' 'admired,' 'jealous'). However, the use of 'corn seers' (intended as 'condescended') is inaccurate and impacts the overall score. Focus on using vocabulary accurately and appropriately. Consider using synonyms or simpler terms if unsure of the precise meaning.

The grammatical range is good, with a mix of simple and complex sentences. There are some minor grammatical errors, such as the phrasing 'back to that time' and the slightly awkward sentence structure in places. While the overall accuracy is decent, refining sentence structure and ensuring correct preposition usage would improve the score.