Band 6+: What do people often do on social media

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant to the question and attempts to explain the purpose of social media usage. However, the response is quite brief and lacks specific examples or details to support the claim. Consider providing more concrete examples of activities people engage in on social media, such as sharing photos, connecting with friends, or following influencers. Elaborating on the types of emotions and connections fostered through social media would also strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The initial sentence is a little odd and detracts from the overall coherence. Try to focus on a clearer structure, perhaps starting with the main point and then providing examples. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "Honestly, I'm a beautiful person." It doesn't add to the answer.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like "emotion" and "connection" are a bit vague. Try to use more specific vocabulary to describe the activities people engage in on social media, such as "sharing updates," "connecting with friends," "consuming content," etc. The phrase "creates the emotion or command" is unclear and could be improved.

There are some grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "use" instead of "uses" and the slightly awkward phrasing of the main clause. While the overall message is clear, improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the score. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.