Band 5+: What do you need to remember in your daily life

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a simple answer. However, it could benefit from more detailed examples and elaboration on how these relationships are remembered and maintained in daily life. Consider providing specific actions or routines that help you remember and nurture these important relationships.

The answer is understandable, but there's some repetition ("remember and remember"). A more concise and varied expression would improve fluency. The structure is simple but effective.

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. Words like "important things" could be replaced with more precise and descriptive language. Expanding on *why* family and friends are important would showcase a wider range of vocabulary.

There are grammatical errors ("something that is new to remember...That that is..."). While the meaning is clear, more accurate and varied sentence structures are needed for a higher score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate grammatical range.