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Band 6+: What do you think are the advantages of buying things from shops rather than markets?

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It has some advantages, like you trust shops more than markets because markets are in the streets or elsewhere. Shops are in buildings where people come to buy what they want, like clothes, and they have trust in that place and the prices.

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It has some advantage like you trust shops than markets because markets in the streets or something else and but shops in the building like someone someplace that people comes to buy everything’s want like clothes or something else and they had trust to that place and trust that prices.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

trust: 2

shops: 2

markets: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from further development and a wider range of vocabulary. Consider expanding on the advantages with more specific examples and elaborating on the reasons behind the perceived trustworthiness of shops.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations. The use of 'like' and 'something else' as fillers disrupts the flow. To improve, try to organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking and use cohesive devices more effectively. Practice speaking on similar topics to build fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and somewhat repetitive ('something else,' 'something'). There's a lack of precision in word choice. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to shopping and commerce. Try to use more specific and varied language to express your ideas. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb conjugations ('trust shops than markets'), missing articles ('shops in the building'), and awkward sentence structure ('someone someplace that people comes'). To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and practice constructing more complex sentences accurately. Review articles, verb tenses, and sentence structure.

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