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Band 5+: What do you think are the advantages of rewarding schoolchildren for good work?

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I think it's the best way for the government or the director to give one million dollars to encourage students. All of the students are studying for the country's development and using many technologies to produce other modern technologies, for example, cars, robots, and more. Contrary to this development, rewarding is the best way to promote good work.

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I think it’s the best way to cut the government or the director give one million dollars and students encourage it. All of the students are studying for the country development and use many technologies and produce other modern technologies, for example car, robot and other. Contrary to the development, the icing is the best way and good work.

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development: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks detail and depth. It focuses on a large-scale reward system rather than exploring the general advantages of rewarding children for good work in a school setting. Consider providing more specific examples of rewards and their impact on student motivation and learning.

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The answer is understandable but lacks coherence. The connection between rewarding students and a million-dollar government initiative is unclear and disrupts the flow. The conclusion is abrupt and doesn't effectively summarize the advantages. Work on structuring your response more logically and creating a smoother transition between ideas. Practice connecting your thoughts with clearer linking words and phrases.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not sophisticated. Words like "icing" are misused and detract from the overall clarity. Expand your vocabulary with more precise and nuanced terms related to education and incentives. Focus on using more academic and formal language.

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Grammar contains several errors, including incorrect article usage and preposition choices. Sentence structures are simple and repetitive. Work on improving grammatical accuracy and expanding your range of sentence structures. Practice using more complex grammatical forms to express your ideas more effectively.

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