Band 4+: What hobbies do you enjoy in your free time?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is partially relevant to the question but lacks detail and clarity. Focus on describing your hobbies with more specific examples and details. Improve the fluency and coherence of your response by using more natural sentence structures and avoiding irrelevant information.

The answer is not very coherent. There are some confusing phrases, such as "what I feel" and the mention of helping health workers seems out of place. The structure needs improvement. Try to organize your thoughts into a clear sequence of activities and explain why you enjoy them.

The vocabulary is quite limited. While the speaker uses words like "leisure time" and "K-dramas," the overall range is restricted. Try to use more descriptive adjectives and varied vocabulary to enrich your answer. For example, instead of "beautiful," you could use words like "captivating," "intriguing," or "moving."

There are several grammatical errors. The sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. The speaker struggles with correct word order and verb tenses. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and different verb tenses.