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Band 5+: what influence to famous people have on their fans

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I believe that famous people always have influence on their fans. The influence of famous people is that their fans tend to always watch them through streaming platforms. They share news or engage with media so that their fans always watch them and like their videos. Thus, they are influenced by their fans to continue watching them.

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I believe that famous people always have influence to their fans. So the influence of famous people I think is like their fans tend to always watch them through streaming platforms. They always share some news or some engaged media such that their fans always watch them and liking on their videos. So they are influenced by their fans to always watch them.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 5

fans: 4

that: 3

always: 3

them: 3

famous: 2

people: 2

influence: 2

watch: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks depth and detailed explanation. It focuses on one narrow aspect (watching videos) and doesn't explore the broader range of influence celebrities can have. Consider discussing different types of influence, such as on fashion, behavior, or social attitudes, and provide specific examples to support your points. A more general and less personal approach would also improve the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The repetition of "their fans always watch them" weakens the fluency. Try to vary sentence structure and use more sophisticated linking words to improve coherence. For example, instead of repeating the phrase, you could say something like, "This constant engagement encourages fans to remain loyal."

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. Words like "engaged media" are a bit vague. Try to use more specific and descriptive vocabulary to enhance the answer. For example, instead of "engaged media," you could say "interactive social media posts" or "engaging content."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor issues. The sentence "So they are influenced by their fans to always watch them" is a bit awkward and could be rephrased for clarity and better flow. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and more complex sentence constructions, to improve the overall grammatical range.

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