Band 5+: What is the most common way people travel in your hometown?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response struggles to directly address the question about the most common way people travel in your hometown. The answer focuses more on tourism and activities like tanning, which are not directly related to the mode of transportation. To improve, try to focus on the specific question asked and provide relevant information about transportation methods used by people in your hometown.

The response is somewhat hesitant and lacks clear organization. There are noticeable pauses and repetitions ('I don't really know'). The answer also drifts slightly off-topic by mentioning TikTok and Bali, which are not directly related to the question about travel in the hometown. To improve, focus on directly addressing the question and organizing thoughts more clearly before speaking. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and avoid unnecessary tangents.

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive ('enjoying,' 'skin'). The phrase 'fending their skin' is not accurate; the correct term is 'tanning their skin.' To improve, expand vocabulary related to travel and leisure activities. Use a wider range of synonyms and avoid relying on the same words repeatedly. Pay attention to using accurate and idiomatic expressions.

The grammatical range is basic, with simple sentence structures. There are some inaccuracies, such as the phrasing '4 year page' instead of 'four-year experience.' The sentence structure is also somewhat awkward in places. To improve, practice using a wider variety of sentence structures and focus on grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to correct tense usage, article usage, and word order.