Band 5+: What is your favourite hobby?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and provides some detail about the hobby. However, it could benefit from more elaboration on the specific aspects of reading that are enjoyed, and perhaps an example of a book or author that has particularly resonated with the speaker. Expanding on the personal experience of the hobby would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and unnatural phrasing, such as "Dear our several hobbies." The structure could be improved by removing redundancies like "so I have a hobby, so I'm interested." Focus on smoother transitions and a more concise delivery.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the student mentions Shakespeare, the vocabulary is quite basic overall. Try to incorporate more precise and nuanced vocabulary to describe your reading habits and the types of books you enjoy. Instead of 'etc.' try to name specific examples.

There are several grammatical errors. "reading my book is increasing my knowledge" is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is often simple and repetitive. Work on more complex sentence structures and ensure subject-verb agreement. Pay attention to articles (a/an/the).