Band 6+: What is your future plan

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a clear plan. However, it could benefit from more detail and elaboration on the specific business, the challenges involved, and how the candidate plans to overcome them. More specific examples would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are some hesitations and repetitions ("I would say that"). A more concise and structured approach would enhance coherence. Consider using smoother transitions between ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Phrases like "most comfortable job" and "most common thing" are not very specific. More precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of "comfortable job," consider using terms like "lucrative" or "fulfilling." Instead of "most common thing," consider "a prevalent career path" or "a popular choice."

There are several grammatical inaccuracies. For example, "when my studies will be completed" should be "when my studies are completed." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure will significantly improve the score. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, appropriately.