Band 6+: what is your hobby

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question and provides some elaboration. To improve, focus on providing more specific details and examples related to your hobbies. Also, ensure that all parts of your answer are clearly relevant to the question asked.

The response demonstrates some fluency but includes noticeable hesitations and some self-correction. The organization of ideas is somewhat disjointed, affecting coherence. To improve, focus on structuring your thoughts more clearly before speaking and using cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The phrase "look perspective from look perspective to the world" is awkward. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more precise and varied vocabulary related to your hobbies. For example, instead of just saying 'drawing,' you could describe the type of drawing you do (e.g., sketching, portraiture, digital art). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The response contains grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb forms ('allows to look perspective') and sentence structure issues ('After I come here, the boss who is coming here'). There are also issues with pronoun usage and clarity. To improve, focus on practicing accurate grammar and sentence construction. Review basic grammar rules and try to use a wider range of sentence structures correctly.