Band 5+: what is your hobby

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question but could benefit from more elaboration on why art and reading are enjoyable hobbies. Providing specific examples or details would enhance the answer.

The answer is somewhat coherent but contains some hesitations and repetitions ('this is...', repeating 'good'). Try to avoid unnecessary pauses and repetitions by planning your answer structure beforehand. Use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. While 'beneficial' is a good word, the overall range is limited. Try to use more varied and descriptive vocabulary related to your hobbies. For example, instead of just saying 'art,' you could specify what kind of art (e.g., painting, sketching, digital art).

There are grammatical errors such as 'reading his book' instead of 'reading books'. The sentence structure is simple and lacks complexity. Focus on using correct articles, plural forms, and a wider range of sentence structures (e.g., compound and complex sentences) to improve your grammatical range.