Band 5+: What kind of cafe is popular in your city?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some information about the popularity of cafes in the city. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the types of cafes and providing more specific details about their popularity. Consider describing the atmosphere, target customer, or unique features of these cafes to give a more complete picture.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The ideas are a bit jumbled. Try to create a clearer structure with a topic sentence and supporting details. For example, you could start by stating the type of cafe and then explain why it's popular. Also, work on smoother transitions between ideas. Reducing the number of hesitations and fillers would improve fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Words like "bursting and hustling" are a bit informal and less descriptive than "bustling" or "vibrant." Using more specific vocabulary to describe the cafes would improve this aspect. Instead of 'instant food,' consider using a more precise term like 'quick meals' or 'grab-and-go options'.

There are some grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and article usage. For example, "this is a reason that have a lot of coffee shops" should be "this is one reason why there are many coffee shops." Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. Practicing more complex sentence structures would improve this score.