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Band 6+: What kind of job do young people like to?

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I reckon that doctors and software engineers are well-paid occupations in my country. The main reason these jobs are developing is the increasing demand for them, which is why most people choose these careers. I think it's an extremely useful job to help develop our country.

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I reckon that doctors and software engineers are well-paid occupations in my country. The main reasons these jobs are being developed. The reason I think so is the demand for this job increasing and being chosen by most people. I think it’s extremely useful job to develop our country.

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some information about well-paid jobs. However, it focuses more on the reasons for the popularity of these jobs rather than the preferences of young people. Consider broadening the scope to include a wider range of jobs and perspectives on what young people find appealing in a career.

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The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The connection between the well-paid jobs and the reasons for their development isn't entirely clear. Try to use more cohesive devices to link your ideas, such as 'because', 'therefore', or 'as a result'. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition, such as 'the reason I think so is...'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise. Words like 'well-paid' and 'developing' are good, but more specific vocabulary would enhance the answer. For example, instead of 'well-paid', you could use 'high-earning' or 'lucrative'. Instead of 'developing', you could use 'in high demand' or 'flourishing'. Try to use more sophisticated vocabulary to show a wider range.

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There are some grammatical errors. The sentence 'The main reasons these jobs are being developed' is grammatically incorrect. It should be something like 'The main reason these jobs are developing is...' or 'The main reasons for the development of these jobs are...'. The final sentence is also slightly awkward. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences.

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