Band 7+: what kind of job would you like to do in the future?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is directly on topic and provides a clear, natural response to the question. It includes relevant details about the type of job, reasons for the choice, and personal benefits, showing a willingness to elaborate. To reach a higher band, you could add a specific example or a more personal touch, such as mentioning a particular role or company, or explaining how this job aligns with your long-term goals. Overall, the response is well-structured and appropriate for the task.

The answer is coherent and logically organized, with a clear introduction of the desired job and reasons. There is a minor self-correction ('prefer probably' instead of 'preferably'), which is acceptable but slightly affects fluency. To improve, avoid hesitations and use more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly precise. The phrase 'business phase' is incorrect; 'business field' or 'business sector' would be more accurate. The use of 'decent salary' and 'comfortable life' is common but not particularly sophisticated. To improve, use more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'corporate environment' or 'financial stability'.

The grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures, including conditional and infinitive phrases. There is a minor error: 'I also would like to learn to earn' should be 'I would also like to earn' (the verb 'learn' is unnecessary and creates confusion). Overall, the answer is clear and understandable, but eliminating such errors would enhance accuracy.