Band 5+: What kind of music do you enjoy listening to? Why?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is understandable, but lacks detail and coherence. Consider expanding on why you enjoy the artists you mentioned, focusing on specific musical qualities or aspects of their work that appeal to you. Also, ensure your response directly addresses the question and avoids unrelated information, such as your future job aspirations.

The answer is understandable but lacks coherence. There are some illogical connections between sentences (e.g., the connection between Dimash and Kiddus is unclear). The speaker also trails off at the end. Improving the logical flow and providing clearer transitions between ideas would improve fluency and coherence.

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. While the speaker uses some appropriate words like "entertainment," "relaxing," and "talent," more sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the response. The phrase "a lot of Kiddus" is unclear and needs rephrasing. Consider using more descriptive adjectives and nouns to showcase a wider range of vocabulary.

The grammar contains several errors. For example, "a lot of Kiddus" is grammatically incorrect. There are also issues with sentence structure and word order. Focusing on accurate sentence construction and avoiding grammatical errors would significantly improve the score. The final sentence is also incomplete and doesn't make sense in the context of the question.