Band 6+: What kind of musics do I like to listen to?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a clear preference. To improve the score and move towards a band 9, consider elaborating further on the response. For example, you could mention specific artists you enjoy, describe the feeling of 'dynamism' in more detail, or contrast rap with other genres you dislike. Expanding the length of the response will demonstrate a greater ability to develop ideas.

The answer is direct and coherent, providing a clear reason for the preference. However, it is quite brief for an IELTS Part 1 response. To reach a higher band, you should aim to extend your answer by providing more detail, such as mentioning a specific artist or describing how the music makes you feel in more depth.

You attempted to use more sophisticated vocabulary with 'sense of dynamic,' but it was used incorrectly (it should be the noun 'dynamism'). While 'prefer the most' is fine, using more varied collocations like 'I am particularly fond of' or 'I have a strong inclination towards' would boost your score. Avoid using 'dynamic' as a noun.

There is a minor grammatical error in the raw transcript: 'listen rap' should be 'listen to rap.' The sentence structure is a simple complex sentence. To improve, try incorporating different structures, such as conditional sentences ('If I'm feeling low, I listen to rap to boost my mood') or relative clauses.