Band 5+: What kind of perfume do you like?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the reasons for liking Hayate perfume beyond its smell and price. Consider discussing specific notes or the overall impression the scent creates. Also, expanding on why you are not generally interested in perfume would add depth.

The answer is understandable, but there are some hesitations and unnatural phrasing. The structure could be improved by separating the two parts of the response more clearly. For example, the speaker could have started with a statement about their general dislike of perfume, then transitioned to their experience with Hayate. Reducing the number of fillers like 'very' would also improve fluency.

The vocabulary is simple. While the speaker uses the word "expensive," more precise vocabulary could be used to describe the scent of the perfume. Instead of "smelling," words like "fragrant," "aromatic," or more descriptive terms could be used. The phrase "very smelling" is not grammatically correct.

There are grammatical errors, such as "I don't interesting for perfume." The sentence structure is also somewhat awkward in places. The speaker needs to work on subject-verb agreement and correct use of adjectives. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.