Band 6+: What kind of things make you feel afraid?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is well-developed and directly addresses the question. It provides specific examples and elaborates on the reasons for feeling afraid, which demonstrates a natural and thoughtful response. To improve, consider using a wider range of vocabulary to describe fear (e.g., 'terrified', 'anxious', 'apprehensive') and ensure grammatical precision in complex sentences. Additionally, you could briefly mention a more everyday or common fear to balance the more abstract ones, which would make the answer even more relatable.

The answer is generally coherent and organized with clear points (losing money, future bankruptcy, losing loved ones). However, there are noticeable hesitations and self-corrections ('adult they, adult they haven't happened yet') and some repetition ('I feel really sad', 'I feel really afraid'). To improve, practice speaking more smoothly, reduce self-corrections, and use a wider range of linking words (e.g., 'moreover', 'in addition') to connect ideas more fluidly.

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, with some good expressions like 'the sense of losing something' and 'go bankrupt'. However, there is a lack of precision in places (e.g., 'adult they' is unclear, 'losing someone that you love' could be more specific). To improve, expand your range of topic-related vocabulary (e.g., 'financial insecurity', 'mortality', 'vulnerability') and use more precise terms to express your ideas clearly.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with correct use of conditional structures ('If I think that maybe one day my company can go bankrupt') and relative clauses ('someone that you love'). However, there are some errors: 'I feel really afraid of because' (unnecessary preposition), 'I can take care' should be 'I can't take care' (missing negative), and 'adult they' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on eliminating small errors and using a wider range of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with multiple clauses.