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Band 7+: What kinds of activities do old people like to do this days

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Well, nowadays a wide range of people want to stay healthy. More older people enjoy staying healthy too, and they are seeking new activities to formalize their healthy lifestyle. For example, enlarging their social circles or going for a stroll are helpful for their daily health routines. These are key factors for more older people staying healthy in everyday life.

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Well, nowadays a high range of people want to stay healthy. More older people enjoy staying healthy too and they are seeking for new actions in order to formalize their hustle lifestyle. For example, they enlarging their social courses or going for a strolling are helpful for their daily healthy actions. And these are the key factors for more older people staying healthy in everyday life.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

healthy: 4

people: 3

their: 3

older: 2

staying: 2

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Task Response

The answer is on topic and attempts to address the question. However, it could benefit from more specific examples of activities and a broader range of interests that older people pursue. Consider expanding on the social and physical aspects of their preferred activities.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally fluent and coherent. The ideas are logically connected, although some transitions could be smoother. Try using phrases like "In addition to this" or "Furthermore" to connect examples more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is mostly appropriate, but some words are used incorrectly (e.g., 'actions' instead of 'activities', 'formalize their hustle lifestyle'). While 'hustle lifestyle' is understandable, it's not the most natural collocation. Consider replacing 'enlarging their social courses' with 'expanding their social circles' or 'participating in more social activities'. Using more precise vocabulary will enhance your response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical errors, such as 'they are seeking for' (omit 'for') and the incorrect verb form in 'strolling are helpful'. The sentence structure is generally correct, but using a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the score. For example, instead of repeating 'are helpful', try using a different structure like 'contribute to their well-being'.

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